When the Sky Bleeds

When the Sky Bleeds (or WtSB for short) is currently a draft of a novel, planned to become a series consisting of at least 3 books. I post a new chapter every Monday to Scribd (and that in turn updates below). The new chapters show up below the old ones, so just scroll down a bit if you have read some already. If you would like alerts on when new chapters are released you can either follow me on Twitter, become a member to my blog to receive an email every time a new chapter is released (and also gain the ability to post on the forums), or add the RSS to your favorite RSS client.

Wish me luck ^-^,

~Otaku

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  • #1 written by Erik
    about 2 months ago
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    Joe, the story is effing awesome! I mean, amazing detail and creativity! Good luck for later!

  • #3 written by Mushyrulez
    about 6 months ago
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    Hey… for some reason, your story doesn’t really make much sense…
    Why isn’t that person surprised that Toji is a gii-manipulator…? How could he have typed such a large story within such a short period of time..? Would he really add that much detail to a mere story on a labtop, and would he actually remember all of that…?

    …IMO this definitely has lots of potential; however… not much else. The beginning seemed quite founded; however, as soon as you went into “supernatural beings”, my mind froze and I stopped reading…

    What about the government, wouldn’t it try to hide the fact? When’s the actual, present story going to begin…?!

    ..I’d like to see where you go with this story; interesting, but… I doubt… it would attract a lot of appeal. It sounds very fanfictionish.

    Don’t get me wrong, this story is great; however, you’ll definitely want to edit it (and by edit, I mean majorly edit, not just edit grammar mistakes and the like)…

    • #4 written by wolfstar
      about 5 months ago
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      Its fine the way it is it makes sense. alot of the stuff your not getting is common sense to me.
      joe if you rewrite this book again i will kick your butt personaly.

      • #5 written by Romance Otaku
        about 5 months ago
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        Haha XD. Don’t worry, I’ve many enough changes to this novel. I want to finish it so I can go on with my life XD.

        • #6 written by Mushyrulez
          about 5 months ago
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          Meh, do what you want; though it’s good for a web-novel, if you really decide to publish it, invest in a lot of editors. It’ll provide contrasting opinions (cough cough) to the feel of your story. Then again, if you just want to get this over with, it doesn’t really matter -_-

          • #7 written by Romance Otaku
            about 5 months ago
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            I kinda feel both ways about it. I love this story, and I know that the plot is good, but the writing would totally redone. So, my plan is to finish it up this summer and move on with my writing life XD.

  • #8 written by wolfstar
    about 6 months ago
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    hey dude. awsome job. when you send it to like the big time publishers and get it published like in a paper book. im totaly buying it.!! keep going im already exsited about reading more.

    p.s. check out my stories and maybe we can talk books sometimes. oh and i dont think i properly thanked you for complementing on my necklace. thx! ~^.^~ (please ignor spelling and grammer mistakes, i suck with that junk)

    • #9 written by Romance Otaku
      about 6 months ago
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      Thanks, and no problem ^-^. (Haha, it’s okay, I’m not too good with spelling myself.)

  • #10 written by kutumoni04
    about 7 months ago
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    hey! nice job! wishin u gud luck :)

  • #12 written by Hikari
    about 7 months ago
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    Nice, keep up the good work! :)

  • #13 written by Taryn
    about 8 months ago
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    Good job i like it keep up the good work buddy.

  • #14 written by Marisa!!!!!!
    about 10 months ago
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    I can’t wait to see more from you Joe! Keep it up!!!!!!!! :D