Comments on: When the Sky Bleeds http://romanceotaku.com A Teen Author's Home Wed, 01 Sep 2010 18:01:42 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0.1 By: Romance Otaku http://romanceotaku.com/when-the-sky-bleeds-wtsb/comment-page-1/#comment-286 Romance Otaku Thu, 17 Jun 2010 19:38:21 +0000 http://romanceotaku.wordpress.com/?page_id=9#comment-286 Haha, thanks ^-^ Haha, thanks ^-^

]]> By: Erik http://romanceotaku.com/when-the-sky-bleeds-wtsb/comment-page-1/#comment-278 Erik Wed, 16 Jun 2010 23:08:36 +0000 http://romanceotaku.wordpress.com/?page_id=9#comment-278 Joe, the story is effing awesome! I mean, amazing detail and creativity! Good luck for later! Joe, the story is effing awesome! I mean, amazing detail and creativity! Good luck for later!

]]> By: WtSB Chapter 8 Posted! | Romance Otaku's Blog http://romanceotaku.com/when-the-sky-bleeds-wtsb/comment-page-1/#comment-178 WtSB Chapter 8 Posted! | Romance Otaku's Blog Tue, 27 Apr 2010 00:06:24 +0000 http://romanceotaku.wordpress.com/?page_id=9#comment-178 [...] When the Sky Bleeds [...] [...] When the Sky Bleeds [...]

]]> By: Romance Otaku http://romanceotaku.com/when-the-sky-bleeds-wtsb/comment-page-1/#comment-99 Romance Otaku Mon, 22 Mar 2010 20:45:33 +0000 http://romanceotaku.wordpress.com/?page_id=9#comment-99 I kinda feel both ways about it. I love this story, and I know that the plot is good, but the writing would totally redone. So, my plan is to finish it up this summer and move on with my writing life XD. I kinda feel both ways about it. I love this story, and I know that the plot is good, but the writing would totally redone. So, my plan is to finish it up this summer and move on with my writing life XD.

]]> By: Mushyrulez http://romanceotaku.com/when-the-sky-bleeds-wtsb/comment-page-1/#comment-98 Mushyrulez Thu, 18 Mar 2010 04:38:04 +0000 http://romanceotaku.wordpress.com/?page_id=9#comment-98 Meh, do what you want; though it's good for a web-novel, if you really decide to publish it, invest in a lot of editors. It'll provide contrasting opinions (cough cough) to the feel of your story. Then again, if you just want to get this over with, it doesn't really matter -_- Meh, do what you want; though it’s good for a web-novel, if you really decide to publish it, invest in a lot of editors. It’ll provide contrasting opinions (cough cough) to the feel of your story. Then again, if you just want to get this over with, it doesn’t really matter -_-

]]> By: Romance Otaku http://romanceotaku.com/when-the-sky-bleeds-wtsb/comment-page-1/#comment-89 Romance Otaku Sun, 14 Mar 2010 02:32:18 +0000 http://romanceotaku.wordpress.com/?page_id=9#comment-89 Haha XD. Don't worry, I've many enough changes to this novel. I want to finish it so I can go on with my life XD. Haha XD. Don’t worry, I’ve many enough changes to this novel. I want to finish it so I can go on with my life XD.

]]> By: wolfstar http://romanceotaku.com/when-the-sky-bleeds-wtsb/comment-page-1/#comment-88 wolfstar Sat, 13 Mar 2010 23:08:12 +0000 http://romanceotaku.wordpress.com/?page_id=9#comment-88 Its fine the way it is it makes sense. alot of the stuff your not getting is common sense to me. joe if you rewrite this book again i will kick your butt personaly. Its fine the way it is it makes sense. alot of the stuff your not getting is common sense to me.
joe if you rewrite this book again i will kick your butt personaly.

]]> By: Clicking Links « O-New http://romanceotaku.com/when-the-sky-bleeds-wtsb/comment-page-1/#comment-80 Clicking Links « O-New Wed, 10 Mar 2010 23:06:10 +0000 http://romanceotaku.wordpress.com/?page_id=9#comment-80 [...] nothing to say today, but I have more links, so… don’t click them if you want… http://romanceotaku.com/when-the-sky-bleeds-wtsb/ ^ RomanceOtaku’s novel-in-progress; When the Sky Bleeds… read it if you want..! [...] [...] nothing to say today, but I have more links, so… don’t click them if you want… http://romanceotaku.com/when-the-sky-bleeds-wtsb/ ^ RomanceOtaku’s novel-in-progress; When the Sky Bleeds… read it if you want..! [...]

]]> By: Mushyrulez http://romanceotaku.com/when-the-sky-bleeds-wtsb/comment-page-1/#comment-78 Mushyrulez Wed, 10 Mar 2010 00:08:18 +0000 http://romanceotaku.wordpress.com/?page_id=9#comment-78 Hey... for some reason, your story doesn't really make much sense... Why isn't that person surprised that Toji is a gii-manipulator...? How could he have typed such a large story within such a short period of time..? Would he really add that much detail to a mere story on a labtop, and would he actually remember all of that...? ...IMO this definitely has lots of potential; however... not much else. The beginning seemed quite founded; however, as soon as you went into "supernatural beings", my mind froze and I stopped reading... What about the government, wouldn't it try to hide the fact? When's the actual, present story going to begin...?! ..I'd like to see where you go with this story; interesting, but... I doubt... it would attract a lot of appeal. It sounds very fanfictionish. Don't get me wrong, this story is great; however, you'll definitely want to edit it (and by edit, I mean majorly edit, not just edit grammar mistakes and the like)... Hey… for some reason, your story doesn’t really make much sense…
Why isn’t that person surprised that Toji is a gii-manipulator…? How could he have typed such a large story within such a short period of time..? Would he really add that much detail to a mere story on a labtop, and would he actually remember all of that…?

…IMO this definitely has lots of potential; however… not much else. The beginning seemed quite founded; however, as soon as you went into “supernatural beings”, my mind froze and I stopped reading…

What about the government, wouldn’t it try to hide the fact? When’s the actual, present story going to begin…?!

..I’d like to see where you go with this story; interesting, but… I doubt… it would attract a lot of appeal. It sounds very fanfictionish.

Don’t get me wrong, this story is great; however, you’ll definitely want to edit it (and by edit, I mean majorly edit, not just edit grammar mistakes and the like)…

]]> By: Chapter 3 of When the Sky Bleeds Has Been Released! | Romance Otaku's Blog http://romanceotaku.com/when-the-sky-bleeds-wtsb/comment-page-1/#comment-76 Chapter 3 of When the Sky Bleeds Has Been Released! | Romance Otaku's Blog Mon, 08 Mar 2010 21:39:42 +0000 http://romanceotaku.wordpress.com/?page_id=9#comment-76 [...] When the Sky Bleeds « My Opinion on Open Source Software [...] [...] When the Sky Bleeds « My Opinion on Open Source Software [...]

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